Punctuation Cheat Sheet: Cutting a Dash

Hyphen

I'm going to skip over the use for breaking up a word between lines, because none of us do it and word-processors keep us all together. Huh!

A hyphen shows an attachment between two words when one of which may not be complete without the other.  In all instances, a hyphen must have no space around it - it must only be used with a word bolted to each ear. When in doubt, consult that dictionary, remembering you are aiming for a clear message.

 

The Compound Modifier

The what? You modify the word grass by saying green grass; therefore, you compound modify the word grass by saying dirty-green grass. Without the hyphen we have a slightly different meaning:

Quote:

Dave always produces well-thought-out discussions.

Oscuridad is owl-wise in his statements.

Donny sold ten-million books

The key with hyphens is to use them liberally in compound modifiers to make their understanding easier. Leaving out a hyphen could change the meaning:

Quote:

R1X avoided the free-pickle club

Is vastly different from:

Quote:

R1X avoided the free pickle club

In the first we are led to believe R1X is avoiding a club who wish to free 'pickle' (whom or whatever pickle is!). The second is clearly regarding how R1X avoided the pickle club, who, apparently, were free (Weird!).

 

After the Verb

Quote:

R1X's face turned a sickening olive-green

Has a completely different meaning to:

Quote:

R1X's face turned a sickening olive green

In the first R1X is the one who's ill, in the second it's R1X's face that makes a sick olive turn green.

 

Prefixing Words

A prefix is anything affixed to the front of an already existing word: covered becomes re-covered (as in: placing a covering over something – again – and not to be mistaken with recovered: getting something back). Some prefixes don’t require an apostrophe: menswear and yet some do: pre-empt. Three rules govern this need for the apostrophe:

When a number of capital letter is employed:

Quote:

non-Chinese speaking

post-1900 wars

pre-Jewish oppression

 un-Litopian behaviour

*  When the existing word already includes a hyphen:

Quote:

Non-successfully-published author

Anti-freewheeling-hippy peace

*  When the existing compound word contains a space (in this instance, all the involved words become hyphenated):

Quote:

Published success – post-published-success

Eighteenth century – post-eighteenth-century

Animal testing protestor – anti-animal-testing protestor

There is one more circumstance in the use of the hyphen; that where repetition is involved:

Quote:

Pre-druggy and post-druggy: Kate Moss just proves what a Rock Star in your life can do to your complexion.

This may be written without the first druggy:

Quote:

Pre- and post-druggy Kate Moss just proves what…

The same goes for words where a hyphen isn’t usually employed (all in the name of avoiding repeating yourself):

Quote:

Statistical- and psychoanalysis are two very different things.

 

Dash

Note that the dash (–) is far bigger than the hyphen (-). In Microsoft Word this appears automatically from the creation of hyphen, when you type a space after the last word – I assure you it does. Alternatively, press and hold both the Ctrl and Shift keys and then press the - (hyphen) key.

Its use, if you remember back to weak interruptions with bracketing commas, is to produce strong interruptions:

Quote:

My boss, a man of low moral character, slipped the fifty into his jacket pocket with a smile.

Is a weak interruption. The sentence would move along without the: a man of low moral character section.  Also, it is a soft aside; it works with the existing sentence and doesn't jar the reader with its addition. However:

Quote:

My boss – that weasely, self-serving toad – slipped the fifty into his jacket pocket with a smile.

That weasely, self-serving toad is a strong interruption. A strong interruption jars the sentence – it wants to be seen.

This bracketing, as with the comma version, may require only one dash if the interruption is placed at the end of the sentence:

Quote:

I couldn't do it – or could I?

 

In speech

Strong interruptions in speech may end with a new sentence. It gives the appearance of an abrupt end to dialogue; the changing of tact or ideas:

Quote:

'Peter, don't press the purple – too late! How many times have I told you?'

Only one dash is used and we end the interruption with the next required punctuation (in the case above: !) and then move onto the next sentence.

A dash may also signify the breaking off of speech:

Quote:

'Hey, I ain't going on no plane! Hannibal, you sucker, you didn't saying anything about no pl–'.

This isn't to be mistaken with when someone's voice trails off (when they're distracted or fall asleep):

Quote:

Helen Tasker after Juno injects her with a sedative – True Lies, people! Come on, work with me here!

Hey! You bitch...

 

Ranges

When people discuss a range of values, dates, cities, etc, the dash can be employed between them, representing either:

Quote:

from ? to ?

between ? and ?

A–Z (from A to Z)

 

Quote:

The Anglo–Franco war went on and on (between Anglo and Franco)

Keep the level 80-85% pressure. (between 80 and 85% / from 80 to 85%)

It is advised that dates remain in full – I lived in Bracknell from 1979 to 2005.

 

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